Well……The cover of this is amazing and got me all fired up and ready to read. But I was disappointed.
This has so much potential to be a good story, but it just seems a little disjointed and the characters are dull for want of a better word. I struggled with dialog as well, it just didn’t seem to flow very well.
The flow was so bad for me that at one point I had to go back a re-read a few pages as I thought I had missed something…. it made it a little confusing.
It is also badly in need of serious editing:
p75 “Are this those your books?” is just one example.
And it just ended. I wasn’t expecting it to just suddenly end so I am glad that there is another book planned and I hope that is going to be a bit more tighter and a much more fuller story.
Sadly this is a 2 stars for me 🙁